Score: 10

"Another solid piece."

submission: Because of You (N)

date: November 4, 2008

I especially like the intro. The structure seems goes against typical popular rock structure and takes on that of a song in a musical or deliberate soundtrack, the structure changing with the mood of the lyrics. And wicked solo. My only dissatisfaction is that occasionally the rhythm falters. You have an amazing song writing talent. It's especially fun to sing along with (nudge nudge, wink wink). 5/5 Keep on writing, man.

Score: 10

"Wow, Dan. Just Wow."

submission: Here You Lay {=MMD=}

date: September 22, 2008

I think this takes the cake as your best Pop song to date. It even tops 'Sand Castles'. I think what really made the difference is the structure. Each section set up for the following, really drawing the listener into your world. And the acoustic guitar in the intro is to die for! I don't hear guitar EQ'd so perfectly in mainstream, seriously! For future reference, the drums in this piece are perfect! Really man, this is amazing stuff. I can't wait to hear more!

-Alex Sandford

Score: 10

"Another great work."

submission: Yesterday (ftr Kyle Blackwood)

date: September 8, 2008

It's really great to see you back! And quite in game. Another epic and touching song, the structure is really great, and the strings sound great. Just a few little places I can suggest improvement. The vocals are pretty buried, so I'd suggest running them through an EQ to cut base and boost treble. Sure, they won't sound great on there own, but when put over everything else they sound the same, just more prominent. And when it comes to duets, I recommend panning the vocals when they're together. Not too much, but about 20% or so left and right. But everything else is just fantastic as usual. The power really comes through in this piece. Looking forward for more like this in the future.

Score: 10

"A soundtrack at heart."

submission: Snowflakes

date: August 12, 2008

Personally I think this belongs in the Classical section, but no matter. It is well produced and a treat to listen to. The piano is well played, the sample is a bit bright but you can't help that. I have the same problem with my Alesis. The arrangement is great, I wouldn't touch the drum track. As for a vocal track, the piano is so melodic on it's own I don't really think there's room for a vocals. Now my only real quarrel with the piece is that it gets a bit repetitive. Remember, in bridge sections, don't be afraid to step of the song's key, particularly if the whole piece is in minor. For example, since the song is in Dm why not switch to the key of G for the bridge? Overall this is a fantastic work, and you showcase more talent than the majority of the top scorers here on newgrounds. I hope hear more from you in the future. Peace.

Score: 10

"Very enticing."

submission: heroes(scotland free again)

date: August 12, 2008

Of your recent multiple entries, this one's my favorite. Very flowing and natural. The naturally recorded elements really add to the song (as opposed to synth elements). But I think a good string ensemble (synth or genuine) on the choruses would've brought the song to new heights. Of course that's just an opinion. Keep up the good work, man.

Score: 10

"Absolutely Beautiful."

submission: Piano and Strings in A minor

date: July 22, 2008

A very beautiful piece, the genuine performance on the keyboard shows and adds life to the piece. A very pensive tone, reminds me of James Newton Howard (who I love). My only advice, to make the strings sound a tad more genuine you could try amping up the reverb on them slightly and cutting a bit of highs out of the EQ. Otherwise, just brilliant work. Keep it up.

Score: 7

"Nice work."

submission: nameless song

date: July 22, 2008

Very good writing, but as I've said countless times to countless other artists, use a real performance on a real keyboard or piano. The dynamics and subtle imperfections make classical music what it is.

Score: 9

"Best remix of the song."

submission: Viva La Vida Rmx

date: July 19, 2008

By far. It's unique and well timed, not to mention memorable. And for once, the synths don't clash. But what I think what would really make this piece kick is some high techno vocals or some rap vocals.

Score: 10

"Whoa."

submission: Soundtrack of Life

date: July 12, 2008

Really avant garde. And surprisingly touching. Just a great experimental piece, man. Gre

Score: 10

"Don't undercut it."

submission: Intermission (Just for shits)

date: June 20, 2008

Some of the greatest songs are just tests. For example take Tocatta and Fugue in Dm. It was most likely written just to test the various pipes over the range of an organ, and now it's a centerpoint of classical music.

I thought it was really soothing. Plus it used my favorite chord progression in the world.

On a side note, we seem to be operating on similar hours as of late. XD